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ummm... title please?

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Here is the finished thing of Titan.
Now you all know whay I hate shading!!!!
I suck at it >:c


Please critique!!!!
I want to know what I need to do better :/
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

OMG im SO JELLY of dis... I LOVE the ghostly shadow surrounding her, it really adds tension to the subject <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
The only errors i saw was, of course, the SHADING. If you want help, just ask me! But Im pretty sure blood isnt bright red, but more like a dark-crimson to near brown. Plus, wherever there is a line, facing upward, you need to add brightness to that particular segment of the body, but otherwise PERFECT IN EVERY WAY
Plus, I LOVE the way you added the shimmer of yellow in her eyes. It really made it more noticable.