Family Sins part 1 "Hey Grace whats up?". A young girl around the age of 14 looks up from her drawing book. The shade from the tree she's under keeping her cool on this warm day. "Oh you know, nothing exciting Jake", "Oh come you must have found something out about whatever that was you where telling me about, ghost's or something" his laugh coming out quick. A small pout makes it way on Grace's face "Hey! It really was but someone stopped it I guess". The teen stands up, notebook in hand, and walks towards her cousin. "Oh yeah, I came to ask you something", A questioning looks plasters the younger girls face, "What?". "Well," he starts sheepishly, "I have some friends that I'm going hunting with this weekend and I was wondering if you wanted to come with us…". Grace starts to answer but the sound of a man yelling from across the field stops her, she flinches and looks down. "I-I have to go but I'll meet you out here tonight to answer…. bye Jacob." The wind blows through her s
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